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Invitations to attend the opening of the assembly hall have been sent to our local Member of Parliament, Ms Wiley, who is not only our local member but who has also taken a great interest in our school for many years, to Mrs Farrugia, who, although she retired from teaching here three years ago, did initiate the assembly hall appeal, to the previous Principal of the school, who was also deeply involved in the initial planning, and to the architects and construction engineers.